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Sathington Willoughby's avatar

OP are you an attorney? You analyze language like one. I find this stuff easy to pick out as well and my legal education is far more useful than my journalistic education in helping me pick this stuff apart. *congratulates self*

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The Cholent's avatar

I led a session at a high school journalism conference about how the media botched the Al-Ahli hospital bombing in Nov. 2024 (NY Times even had to issue a correction for relying on unreliable information). One thing that's easy to notice is the use of passive voice - e.g., "3 killed in attack" removes the subject and encourages the reader to come to their own conclusion. I also notice that often the "other side" of the story comes out around the 10th paragraph/third column/jump page (if it's a print paper), way after most readers have decided to move on. For instance, in an article about Gaza on the brink of famine, toward the end the author might finally drop in Israel's claim that Hamas is stealing the aid. Finally, I am enraged at the liberal use of adverbs and adjectives in news stories, which leads readers toward emotions.

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